I just played the tech demo, and I'm most pleased to see that the spirit of Loom's gameplay is being carried on in a manner that's appropriate for the Blacksmiths.  One thing I noticed though was that the script had a number of grammar mistakes throughout.  I fancy myself a decent writer, so I was wondering if you were interested in an editor/proofreader.  You guys seem to have the creative side under control, but I'd love to help with the polishing.